Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

Here is the draft of my rhetorical analysis paper.

teachandlearn "Essay structure diagram by a grade seven student"
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Primarily, I want to make sure that my introduction and conclusion fit the guidelines, and that I included enough textual evidence. I basically wrote my draft all at once so there could be some oversights. I put a lot of emphasis on engaging with my particular audience and staying focused on rhetorical analysis.