Draft of Public Argument

The draft of my public argument is an opinion column intended for use in Wired magazine.

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I am primarily concerned with identifying which sections of my argument seem self explanatory, and which sections need more background and evidence. Some sections of my argument are very general and expand the principles that I acknowledge in my analysis of the F-35. The main body is specific to the F-35, so I want to make sure that my transitions between the two discussions are effective. Here is the draft of my public argument.